not too bad
well, first i wanna say that it beat the shit out of my first flash. it's obvious you put thought and effort into this animation. i know you're aware of what can be done to make a movie better - and that takes time, which is hard for a single person animating a "short" sequence. your illustration shows you have talent. i'm sure you could blow us away if you combined some frame-by-frame animation w/ the skills you already have with flash.
overall, enjoyed it - keep submitting stuff